One day the dog named Joey and his owner went camping in the mountains, when they arrived he prepared the tent and when it's done he would go and find food. While walking in the middle of the night the dog followed Fred, his friend and something strange happened, There were creepy sounds going on around the bush and flying creatures above their head. they ran fast to go back to their camp site. They looked tired and thirsty, Fred covered his dog with a blanket and gave him water and food.Then the next day Fred told the camp leader the incident happened to them and they were given safety precautions.
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Kamusta Jhonas, I love reading your work, the way you add the details is awesome.
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